From 3cf406d7af85a20d71d0b22263460637574af42f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "A. Wilcox" <AWilcox@Wilcox-Tech.com>
Date: Sun, 24 Nov 2019 09:39:52 -0600
Subject: Install: small tweaks

---
 src/install/2_req.xml       | 4 ++--
 src/install/3_beginning.xml | 8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'src')

diff --git a/src/install/2_req.xml b/src/install/2_req.xml
index dd2949f..8f14692 100644
--- a/src/install/2_req.xml
+++ b/src/install/2_req.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
         On a Macintosh, choose <guimenuitem>About This Mac</guimenuitem> from the <guimenu>Apple</guimenu> menu, and then choose <guibutton>System Report</guibutton> or <guibutton>More Info</guibutton>.
     </para>
     <section id="cpu">
-        <title>Processor type and speed</title>
+        <title>Processor type and speed requirements</title>
         <formalpara id="pmmx">
             <title>Intel x86 (32-bit)</title>
             <para>You will need at least <emphasis role="bold">a Pentium or Celeron compatible CPU, with MMX extensions</emphasis>.
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
         </formalpara>
     </section>
     <section id="ram_disk">
-        <title>Memory and disk space</title>
+        <title>Memory and disk space requirements</title>
         <para>Memory and disk space requirements depend on the edition of Adélie Linux you wish to use.</para>
         <table frame="all">
             <title>Minimum and recommended memory and disk space</title>
diff --git a/src/install/3_beginning.xml b/src/install/3_beginning.xml
index 2602ebd..cef9bdd 100644
--- a/src/install/3_beginning.xml
+++ b/src/install/3_beginning.xml
@@ -22,14 +22,14 @@
                 on Mac OS X, you may refer to <ulink url="https://support.apple.com/en-us/HT201250">Apple Support</ulink>.</para>
         </section>
         <section id="prep_partition">
-            <title>Hard Disk Layout</title>
+            <title>Determine Hard Disk Layout</title>
             <para>If your computer will be exclusively running the Adélie Linux operating environment, and you don't plan on installing other environments, you may skip this section; System Installation can create a disk layout for you automatically.</para>
             <para>If you wish to "multi-boot" your computer, running multiple operating environments, you will need to carefully consider the layout of your disk.
                 If you already have an existing operating environment on your computer, you should perform the partitioning step using the tools of that environment.
-                Adélie Linux System Installation supports creating new partitions on a disk, but it cannot remove or resize existing partitions.</para>
+                Adélie Linux System Installation supports creating new partitions on a disk, but it cannot remove or resize existing partitions.
+                You may need to consult your existing environment's documentation to determine how to correctly set up a multi-boot environment.</para>
             <para>On most computers, Adélie Linux requires only a single partition, which will contain all of your data.
                 However, on some computers, you may need a separate boot partition, which will contain the boot loader software that your computer uses to start up.
-                If you already have an existing operating environment on your computer, you may need to consult its documentation to determine how to set up a multi-boot environment.
                 For more information, consult your hardware or firmware documentation, and the Installation Handbook section on disk partitioning.<!-- XXX TODO XREF TO THAT SECTION --></para>
             <para>As noted in <xref linkend="ram_disk"/>, the disk space needed for an installation of Adélie Linux will vary based on your desired installation type.
                 You will also need additional room on your disk for your personal data files.</para>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
                 System Installation will provide a default name for you.</para>
         </section>
         <section id="prep_network">
-            <title>Networking Details</title>
+            <title>Gather Networking Details</title>
             <para>If you will be connecting to a network or the Internet, you should have your connection's details handy so that you can provide them during the installation.</para>
             <para>Virtually all home networks and Internet connections use Dynamic IP addressing via DHCP and/or SLAAC.
                 In this case, you will be able to use the Automatic option in System Installation.</para>
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