From dbd42e84d845e6544c2e4aede948f115acd59fdb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "A. Wilcox" <AWilcox@Wilcox-Tech.com>
Date: Sat, 16 Dec 2017 01:15:20 -0600
Subject: Software: change text based on discussion on #Adelie

---
 softwarepage.cc | 31 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/softwarepage.cc b/softwarepage.cc
index 406fb33..a75545d 100644
--- a/softwarepage.cc
+++ b/softwarepage.cc
@@ -15,29 +15,29 @@ SoftwarePage::SoftwarePage(QWidget *parent) : HorizonWizardPage(parent)
         setTitle(tr("Select Software"));
 
         descLabel = new QLabel(tr(
-                    "Select the software you want to install on your"
+                    "Select the software you want to install on your "
                     "computer.  You can add more later."));
         descLabel->setWordWrap(true);
 
         desktop = new QCheckBox(tr(
-                  "&Desktop Software - browser, email client, media "
+                  "&Desktop Software – browser, email client, media "
                   "player, and more"));
         kde = new QCheckBox(tr(
-              "Use the &KDE Plasma 5 desktop\nIdeal for newer computers, "
-              "KDE Plasma 5 provides a clean,\nmodern experience."));
-        xfce = new QCheckBox(tr(
-               "Use the &XFCE 4 desktop\nXFCE provides a classic desktop "
-               "experience well suited to\nsmaller screens."));
+              "Use the &KDE Plasma 5 desktop\nIdeal for newer computers "
+              "with a clean, modern design."));
         lxqt = new QCheckBox(tr(
-               "Use the &LXQt desktop\nLXQt provides a modern experience "
-               "similar to KDE Plasma 5,\noptimised for older hardware."));
+               "Use the &LXQt desktop\nOptimised for older computers with a "
+               "design similar to Plasma."));
+        xfce = new QCheckBox(tr(
+               "Use the &XFCE 4 desktop\nProvides a classic design "
+               "suitable for smaller screens."));
         openbox = new QCheckBox(tr(
-                  "Use the &OpenBox desktop\nOpenBox is for people who are "
-                  "familiar with other Linux/Unix\ndesktop experiences."));
+                  "Use the &OpenBox desktop\nFor those familiar with other "
+                  "Linux/Unix desktops."));
         server = new QCheckBox(tr(
-                 "&Server Software - Web server, print server, and more"));
+                 "&Server Software – Web server, print server, and more"));
         advanced = new QCheckBox(tr(
-                   "&Advanced - select which software to install"));
+                   "&Advanced – select which software to install"));
 
         QObject::connect(desktop, (void (QCheckBox:: *)(bool))&QCheckBox::clicked,
                          [=](bool checked) {
@@ -45,17 +45,18 @@ SoftwarePage::SoftwarePage(QWidget *parent) : HorizonWizardPage(parent)
         });
 
         desktop->setChecked(true);
+        kde->setChecked(true);
 
         typeGroup = new QButtonGroup(this);
         typeGroup->addButton(kde);
-        typeGroup->addButton(xfce);
         typeGroup->addButton(lxqt);
+        typeGroup->addButton(xfce);
         typeGroup->addButton(openbox);
 
         desktopLayout = new QVBoxLayout;
         desktopLayout->addWidget(kde);
-        desktopLayout->addWidget(xfce);
         desktopLayout->addWidget(lxqt);
+        desktopLayout->addWidget(xfce);
         desktopLayout->addWidget(openbox);
 
         nudgeOver = new QHBoxLayout;
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